Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Human always uses different kind of energies. For many years, People have used wood to make fire. After human found about coal,
this
stone becomes the primary
source
of
energy
. When people discovered fossil
oil
, coal replaced with these new sources. All of these sources have some limitations.
First
, we do not have enough sources of theme. In the world, a few countries have these sources
such
as the Middle East countries.
Secondly
, these sources are underground. We must spend a lot of money to achieve them.
In addition
, after we get them, we have to convert them to become useful. These processes do not easy at all.
Finally
, fossil
oil
is danger of climate. Pollution that we have now is resulting of using fossil
oil
. In my opinion, government must try to find new sources of
energy
. Today we have new sources.
For example
, we try to
use
the
energy
of the sun, or water even wind. All these nature energies are clean and do not harmful at all.
However
, these sources do, not enough for all purposes. We cannot
use
of them in factories or in cars.
Moreover
, the
next
generation of us
also
will need fossil
oil
. We should not
use
all of them. May be nuclear
energy
is good replacement for fossil
oil
, but it is dangerous.
This
source
is more dangerous than another
source
of
energy
. We remember events
such
as Hiroshima. To conclude, both the government and people must try to reduce the
use
of harmful
source
energy
. The government should allocate more budgets on the researcher to find the new
source
of
energy
.
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  • spearheading
  • sustainable
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • transitioning
  • economic implications
  • government policies
  • research and development
  • national energy security
  • public-private sector collaboration
  • diversifying
  • environmental impact
  • clean energy
  • industry growth
  • dependence on imported fuels
  • alternative sources
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