Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Human always uses different kind of energies. For many years, People have used wood to make fire. After human found about coal,
this
stone becomes the primary source
of energy
. When people discovered fossil oil
, coal replaced with these new sources. All of these sources have some limitations.
First
, we do not have enough sources of theme. In the world, a few countries have these sources such
as the Middle East countries. Secondly
, these sources are underground. We must spend a lot of money to achieve them. In addition
, after we get them, we have to convert them to become useful. These processes do not easy at all. Finally
, fossil oil
is danger of climate. Pollution that we have now is resulting of using fossil oil
.
In my opinion, government must try to find new sources of energy
. Today we have new sources. For example
, we try to use
the energy
of the sun, or water even wind. All these nature energies are clean and do not harmful at all. However
, these sources do, not enough for all purposes. We cannot use
of them in factories or in cars. Moreover
, the next
generation of us also
will need fossil oil
. We should not use
all of them. May be nuclear energy
is good replacement for fossil oil
, but it is dangerous. This
source
is more dangerous than another source
of energy
. We remember events such
as Hiroshima.
To conclude, both the government and people must try to reduce the use
of harmful source
energy
. The government should allocate more budgets on the researcher to find the new source
of energy
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