Some people think certain prisoner should be made unpaid work instead of being put behind bar .. discus it with your own opinion.

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crime rate

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the crime rate

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the non strict environment

a non strict environment

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and even that

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in some developed countries

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offenders are given

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of less size or importance

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activities during their punishment period. I firmly believe that if the youngsters criminal make to do

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not paid

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environmental work, the crime rate would be

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made less in size or amount or degree

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that will hold up my opinion

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and foremost idea, the criminal

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who commit low level crime

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stealing

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e things and disobeying the traffic rules) will be forced to do unpaid social activities like cleaning the city roa

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,planting the trees and washing the public

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a lavatory (particularly a lavatory in a public place)

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s which will

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cut down on; make a reduction in

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e the environmental issues easily