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Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour. Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behaviour. Discuss both views and give own opinion (Reported in 2017)

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Some people argue that by watching television their children will influence their attitude a lot while, others think that it's influencing nature is because of the amount of
time
 they spend on the TV's and other entertainment resources.
However
,
this
 essay will discuss both sides of arguments to influence their behaviour. Children's usually imitate a lot of advertisements which they have been watching on the entertainment platform. Ultimately, over a period of
time
, their behavioural skills will change. At times, those
uncertainity
being unsettled or in doubt or dependent on chance
uncertainties
 of children's behaviour is not easy to catch and it's
takes
Suggestion
taking
time
.
In addition
 to that, it's all varies
on
Suggestion
in
 different categories of instances, they prefer to watch.
For example
, by seeing a Boost advert to increase the stamina for the cricket batting, kid's who are interested towards the Cricket they tend to influence for that.
On the other hand
, people think that, the behavioural changes will happen for the kids by the significant amount they spend with the television ads.By watching a certain period of
time
 in a day, kids will addict to watch
continuosly
at every point
continuously
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
 of the curiosity of the advertisement.
Additionally
, they will be in that advert world only since they have been observing them for so many days.In a recent survey by London
Time
 Magazine stated that, almost 70 percentage of kids
are influencing
Suggestion
is influencing
 merely by watching the advertisements for a long
hours
Suggestion
hour
. To conclude, In my view,
Irresepctive
in spite of everything; without regard to drawbacks
irrespective
 of
time
 factor and type of advertisement it is, children's always attract toward that advert and they try to
immitate
reproduce someone's behavior or looks
imitate
 them with their own way it
lead
Suggestion
leads
 to their attitude changes.
However
,
Accept space
,
by
telecating
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
telecasting
telecommuting
 suitable and precise adverts, kids will be entertained a lot. Apparently, there would be no
further
 behavioural changes since they are
real purpose
Suggestion
the real purpose
 of life.

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