The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement
Allocation of budget for recreational activities
such
as arts, music and drama classes by the authorities is an unnecessary splurge. Whereas, spending money in providing facilities to the democratic has more worth than the former. Linking Words
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essay agrees Linking Words
this
contemplation that the fund investment should be on projects which provide greater benefits to the mass. Education and health sectors are the two critical areas where support of bureaucrats is required immensely.
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with, there Linking Words
is
a lot of issues which normal people face in Suggestion
are
thier
lives, having of them or themselves
their
the good
academic education for their children is one of them. Today, to get the higher studies, it takes fortune which is not possible for every family. Suggestion
the best
Administartion
should not only take initiatives to curb Suggestion
Administration
this
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scourage
, but a whip used to inflict punishment (often used for pedantic humor)
scourge
courage
scarf
also
should allocate a decent amount of budget in order to lessen the burden of parents in making the bright future of their children which are Linking Words
future
of the nation. To take an example, as per the recent survey by the Economic Times of India, the Indian Government has Suggestion
the future
spended
two thousand depleted of energy, force, or strength
spent
crores
on promoting the Suggestion
culutural
events, whereas only Rs. Fifteen Hundred of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors
cultural
crores
has been Suggestion
alloted
to the universities to given as a task
allotted
allowed
fulfill
their demands. It makes only twenty percent of the money which has been provided to the education put in effect
fulfil
sector which
is certainly not sufficient to Accept comma addition
sector, which
upgarde
it.
Another major issue is the health facilities, if in a country medical arrangements will be poor, it would not be able to sustain a healthy environment for the public. In the absence of primary essential needs, having the eye on rate higher; raise in value or esteem
upgrade
peripherel
activities would not make a drastic change in people's lives. Government must take the stringent action by making it a priority and by providing the supply of required resources to the hospitals as there is a grave dearth of doctors, nurses, modern on or near an edge or constituting an outer boundary; the outer area
peripheral
equipements
and latest infrastructure, which could only be elevated by investing of funds. an instrumentality needed for an undertaking or to perform a service
equipment
For instance
, transplantation of an organ is a major activity which is available only a few of the hospitals which is almost out of reach of many people. By allocating budget in Linking Words
this
sector, Linking Words
government
could save many lives.
To recapitulate, Suggestion
the government
governments
although
it is irrefutable that arranging funds for cultural activities is essential, to save human lives and providing good education Linking Words
are
pivotal. In Suggestion
is
this
contentious issue to decide the expenditure of the government between essential needs or luxury, undoubtedly basic needs and rights have Linking Words
paramount place
; Suggestion
a paramount place
therfore
, government should invest the money more on public facilities rather than creativity.(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
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