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An increasing number of advertisements on TV aim at children. What are the effects of television advertising? Should television advertising be controlled.

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Nowadays, there is a growing concern the fact that the index of advertisements on TV aim at children. Television advertising brings about some effects.
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, I think television advertising should be controlled. On the one hand, some consequences related to associated with
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 issue should be mentioned. The most serious effect is that parents must waste money for unnecessary things. Seeing that their children asked to buy items attracting them on TV. Another detrimental impact is that children will become
unobeyed
not paid
unpaid
, spoilt or greedy for toys, video games and comics.
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, parents are difficult to teach them because children are controlled by TVC. Since
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 issues are serious, the governments and individuals should take steps immediately to address these problems.
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, avoiding advertisements that
effects
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affects
 people’s lives, governments should
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enhance
 more the stricter laws the ad’s contents.
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,
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the commercials
 will have better contents which appropriate
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for
 children. Another method is to have a warning at the beginning of each ad to remind parents to watch commercials with their kids.
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 but not least, families
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 play a crucial role in controlling the ads content and decide whether if the ads are suitable for children.
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, they can stand up against the irrelevant advertisements.
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