There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir, I am Paul Smith, living on Park Avenue, Juliet Apartments, Ontario. I am writing to complain about the bus service in our area. We are facing so much difficulty regarding

arrival

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the arrival

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and departure of

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. In our area,

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come so late that people never arrived

to

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at

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their offices on time. If

sometime

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buses

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are on time,

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they never depart on time, which create so many problems. We cannot rely on

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to travel from one place to another. Some of my friends got fired from their jobs for being late to work. People who do not have their own cars

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apply

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are hiring costly taxis to arrive

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at their

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workplace. It is out of their

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. I want you to start

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a fast

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bus service in our area.

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will result in reliable timings of the

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and people may

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get benefit from

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. Hoping for quick action to be taken by you. Yours faithfully, Paul Smith