There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir, I am Paul Smith, living on Park Avenue, Juliet Apartments, Ontario. I am writing to complain about the bus service in our area. We are facing so much difficulty regarding
arrival
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and departure of
buses
. In our area,
buses
come so late that people never arrived
to
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at
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their offices on time. If
sometime
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buses
are on time,
then
they never depart on time, which create so many problems. We cannot rely on
buses
to travel from one place to another. Some of my friends got fired from their jobs for being late to work. People who do not have their own cars
,
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are hiring costly taxis to arrive
their
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workplace. It is out of their
budgets
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. I want you to start
fast
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a fast
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bus service in our area.
This
will result in reliable timings of the
buses
and people may
also
get benefit from
this
. Hoping for quick action to be taken by you. Yours faithfully, Paul Smith
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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