There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I am Paul Smith, living on Park Avenue, Juliet Apartments, Ontario. I am writing to complain about the bus service in our area. We are facing so much difficulty regarding
arrival
and departure of Correct article usage
the arrival
buses
.
In our area, buses
come so late that people never arrived to
their offices on time. If Change the preposition
at
in
sometime
Replace the word
sometimes
buses
are on time, then
they never depart on time, which create so many problems. We cannot rely on buses
to travel from one place to another.
Some of my friends got fired from their jobs for being late to work. People who do not have their own cars,
are hiring costly taxis to arrive Remove the comma
apply
their
workplace. It is out of their Change preposition
at their
budgets
.
I want you to start Fix the agreement mistake
budget
fast
bus service in our area. Correct article usage
a fast
This
will result in reliable timings of the buses
and people may also
get benefit from this
.
Hoping for quick action to be taken by you.
Yours faithfully,
Paul SmithSubmitted by JAS on
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