People generally know that the environment is important. However, most individuals still don't take responsibility to protect the environment. Why is this? what should be done to encourage people to protect the environment. Give reasons for your answer or include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

The Environment plays an important role in the healthy l
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human beings. Despite the fact of the importance of the environment, there are numerous concerns have aroused due to careless human being actioned
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as deforestation and air pollutions are a few of the reasons to blame it. On the one hand, due to selfishness of human being deforestation has boomed by causing an adverse effect on our environment. To illustrate
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point, people cutting forests to construct houses just to accommodate the needs of over population.
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, shelter is important for every human being, the environment should be considered equally. In my view, the Government should give building house permission in an open area, away from the greenery.Research proved that plantation activity in the society has added an awareness of changing environmental issues.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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