Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. Do you think this is causing more good than harm for the home countries?

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Dear Tom, I'

so sorry about the demise of your brother and I intend to come to London just to sympathize with his family. I plan to visit

week Friday, 24th of February but I'

only be able to stay for just three days, because I have to resume work on Tuesday, the 29th of February. I know we have a lot to talk about and we'

be able to catch up when I arrive. I'

like to know if you'

be able to accommodate me in your apartment throughout my stay. I'

be glad to crash on your sofa. I know you'd like to inform your wife of my coming and I'

sure she'

be glad to let me in. Don't worry about my feeding and laundry. I'

aware that the cost of living in England is quite high and I'

prepared to foot my bills. I'

looking forward to hearing from you soonest. Warm regards, Sam.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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