some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. discuss both these views and give your opinion

There is a saying that children are the leaders of

tomorrow which

Accept comma addition

tomorrow, which

has led to a debate as how children should be engaged during their leisure times. Some believe that guardians should implore their wards to participate in group activities that are organised, while others think that it is more important for children to entertain themselves. On one hand, when little kids are part of

formal group gatherings

Suggestion

the formal group gathering

formal group gathering

, it helps them to understand the role of

team work

cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)

teamwork

and

also

in developing several skills

such

as social skills.

For instance

, children who use their free time to be part of a community sport training are able to pick up useful skills that will be of importance to them

on

Suggestion

in

to

the immediate as well as in the future when they are employed or employers.

On the other hand

, when children are able to use their leisure time by themselves without interference from others, they are able to handle challenges without needing

inputs

Suggestion

input

from others which helps them to be proactive.

Similarly

,

such

individuals are able to work without supervision and they eventually learn how to be autonomous. These skills are

also

of uttermost importance to them as children and when they become adults. To conclude, encouraging young children in organized activities and

also

learning to occupy themselves both have positive outcomes. As

such

, both should be encouraged,

however

, there must be

balance

Suggestion

a balance

.