The chart illustrate the average percentages in typical meals in the USA of three types of nutrients including sodium

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The charts illustrate the average percentages in typical meals in the USA of three types of nutrients, including sodium, saturated fat and added

sugar

. All of these are unhealthy when eaten too much.

Overall

, sodium and saturated fat have found in

dinner

the most,

whereas

the meal that has added

sugar

the most is snacks. All of these three nutrients are found in

breakfast

the least. We can see the most proportion of sodium is found in

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dinner

(43%)

while

the lowest percentage is 14% of

this

nutrient

Unnecessary verb

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found in

breakfast

and snacks. The

number of

Correct quantifier usage

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percentage of saturated fat is most

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dinner

at 37% and the least is

breakfast

Change preposition

at breakfast

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at 16%.

According to

the added

sugar

chart, there is 42% of added

sugar

in snacks which is the highest percentage of

this

nutrient,

whereas

there is only 16% of

this

nutrient in

breakfast

. There are 19% and 23% of added

sugar

in lunch and

dinner

respectively.

Mon Oct 07 2019

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