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Nowadays, some parents put pressure their children to be successful. What are the reasons for this. Is this a positive or negative development?

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In the modern world, we are living in a competitive society, which is every individual trying to reach life
gales
the state of affairs that a plan is intended to achieve and that (when achieved) terminates behavior intended to achieve it
goals
 and
dreames
a series of mental images and emotions occurring during sleep
dreams
dreamed
 to become successful. Nowadays, parents are forcing their children to become successful.
However
, studies show there are many negative effects on the children who force to perform.
Firstly
, many researchers have proven, freedom in childhood is essential for the development of the human brain. During a very young
age children
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age, children
 learning them by studying world
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
. It is often that every individual has seen, the world in different views
also
 their desire and interest will not be the same. But many parents expect their children to become a doctor and
engineer
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an engineer
. As an example, if some students like
art but
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art, but
 the parent will force to do science those students will
fail
make full, also in a metaphorical sense
fill
 their life due to the lack of interest.
Secondly
, children need to interact with nature and beauty,
also
 they need love and freedom to think. Nowadays it is often seen that many children attend classes, at an early age
consequently
 they don't have much time to spend quality time with their parents.
This
 may lead to a serious mental problem.
Furthermore
, there is a possibility, those who don't spend quality life with their families and nature, to become insensitive people in the future.
Finally
, I believe that the attention of parent is important to achieve the success of children, But mother and father need to understand their children and listen to their
idea
Suggestion
ideas
 and choose their path.
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