Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Many
goods especially
Accept comma addition
goods, especially
food
from foreign countries are imported to domestic and consumed by customer these days. Individuals have faith in the grow of
environment
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the environment
and economy of
country
if people use no more than
food
that provided by domestic farmer. It is a belief that if
citizen
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citizens
a citizen
start choosing only
food
from
local farmer
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local farmers
a local farmer
, it can bring more benefits to
country
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the country
than drawback can make.
Food
from local
famer
a person who operates a farm
farmers
can be infested with chemicals and
that is
the downside of local cuisine.
Farmer who
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Farmer, who
A farmer who
A farmer A farmer who
The farmer who
have greedy personality can make use of
pesticide
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pesticides
a pesticide
and
growth chemical
Accept comma addition
growth, chemical
for plants because plants can be mature faster by
this
way.
Therefore
, the
food
that we consumed can be
infested
serve oneself to, or consume regularly
ingested
and cause many diseases.
For instance
, the main reason that lead to
diarrhea
frequent and watery bowel movements; can be a symptom of infection or food poisoning or colitis or a gastrointestinal tumor
diarrhoea
is vegetable and meat have a certain amount of chemical left in there.
On the other hand
, when people have more
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
in local products and spend money on them more than imported products, the economy and the
environment
will be improved in many ways. When people buy local
food
, there is a small amount of money
charge
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charged
for taxes
then
deliver to
National Bank
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the National Bank
.
In addition
, the higher the budget in National Bank, the higher the living standards of
citizen
improve.
For example
, more hospitals, parks, roads are upgraded for the resident to enjoy better service and to improve the quality of life. Because individuals use local foods more than before, so they have to
product
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produce
more to meet the demand.
Therefore
, more trees and plants are planted in many places. It will be affected the
environment
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environmental
quality because of metabolism in plants. There will be fresh air everywhere rather than polluted one for people to
breath
draw air into, and expel out of, the lungs
breathe
in because of metabolism in plants.
Furthermore
, the health of
citizen
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citizens
the citizen
can be improved when they inhale and exhale fresh air. In conclusion, the drawbacks
are just minor when compare
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are just minor when compared
are just minor when compare
to the benefits can bring.
That is
a duty of
citizen
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citizens
a citizen
to contribute help for
country
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countries
a country
in need. And buy
food
from
local farmer
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local farmers
a local farmer
is the answer that
country
seek
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seeks
because it is benefit
for
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of
to
the economy and the
environment
of
country
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the country
a country
.
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