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Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree?

#energy #choice #demand
The preference of the nuclear
energy
 as a choice is debatable. Now-a-days,
this
energy
 is suggested to be a preferable choice for meeting the overwhelming need.
This
 essay will discuss, why nuclear
energy
 is the best choice for meeting the rising demands. Quite a lot of people, suggest that the nuclear
energy
 is the best source for producing the electricity, as they are less vulnerable, when compared to others. They are likely to produce less carbon-di-oxide,
in contrast
 to other types of sources that are used for generating the current.
As
other than what is under consideration or implied
Else
, there is less production of harmful gases, there is minimal damage to the environment, by reducing the acid rain, the global warming etc. As, an illustration, in China before using
this
 source for manufacturing the current, their pollution rate was uncontrollable, but after the usage of
this
, it came down by 80%. In earlier times, the China was using the fossil fuel, which released, huge amount of toxic gases, and meanwhile, they were very harmful to both the environment and the humans.
However
, there is a dramatic surge in the usage of the former, as their installation does not require any cause to humans. The raw material needed in nuclear
energy
, is Uranium and they do not consume a lot of space, whereas, the other
energy
 providers, occupy a plenty of space. To support, the wind
energy
 is
also
 a preferable one in terms of pollution, but when it comes to the space,
this
 requires a huge area and it will not allow the people nearby to stay peacefully. The noise created by
this
energy
 provider will not allow the public to live around it, and they
also
 occupy a lot of residential area. In conclusion, it is strongly evident that the nuclear power station provides many benefits to the public, in terms of pollution, generating electricity and they
also
 do not disturb the regular lifestyle of the surroundings.

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