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Some people think that only people who have qorked for a company for many years should be promoted to a higher position.Do you agree or disagree.

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A few people hold an opinion that employees who have dedicated many years working in a particular
company
 should be given executive positions in a
company
.I disagree with
this
viewpoint in as
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viewpoint as
 much as younger workers may have more skills and if not provide with an opportunity for a promotion they will become
demotivated
.
To begin
 with
,
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,
although
 senior employees
have proved
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have proven
 to be reliable and loyal
,
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,
more often than not
,
Accept space
,
it is novices who have a wider cluster of actual skills.
This
 is because young specialists exert their full
efgort
earnest and conscientious activity intended to do or accomplish something
effort
 in mastering their hard and soft skills in order to meet the requirements of today's highly competitive job market.
Therefore having
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Therefore, having
being
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
promotex
contribute to the progress or growth of
promoted
 with
such
 workers may bring innovation and help to apply
latest technological advances
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the latest technological advances
 into that
company
.
Furthermore
,
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,
another reason why less experienced staff members should have chances for a better promotion is that
otherwise
 they will not be motivated to do their best.Knowing that
inspite
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in spite
 of working hard they will not be promoted
,
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,
young employees are likely to grow reluctant
,
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,
which may affect the
company
's revenue. To conclude
,
Accept space
,
even though individuals have worked fewer years for a particular
company
 might be less unworthy
,
Accept space
,
they should be equally promoted as they have up-to-date knowledge and skills.
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