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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

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I am writing
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 letter to complain about my dissatisfaction about the food at your restaurant. Since my family members are in a rush to catch the
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 immediate flight towards my hometown and they do not have enough time to have their dinner. So I planned for the nearby food court
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 of looking the best in the town. I usually prefer to have a delicious meal for the minimum of 4.5 rating restaurants.
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, on that day, we ordered the north Indian Thali item which my family love to eat regularly at outside.
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 by looking at that menu item of t
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 it seems to have better taste. But, after 10 minutes, I found that, the taste and the quality of rice is not up to the mark and even worse I would say. I have never had
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 tasteless food in my life. In order to increase the quality and taste of the recipe, probably you need to hire an international chef.
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 to that, the cleaning staff need to organized in a proper manner to avoid hygiene and other necessary arrangements at the restaurant. Looking forward, I hope you will implement those mentioned actions soon. Yours Sincerely, Shareef

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial commitment
  • down payment
  • initial costs
  • allocate resources
  • maintenance costs
  • mobility
  • relocate
  • market fluctuations
  • property value
  • building equity
  • appreciate in value
  • asset
  • personalization
  • restrictions
  • rental increases
  • lease renewal
  • financial instability
  • housing budgets
  • long-term security
  • landlord
  • lease agreement
  • equity
  • substantial
  • property ownership
  • property market
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