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the internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. how far do you agree with this prediction?

#internet #course #books #schools #prediction
Everybody knows that using the
internet
 is to
extent
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extend
 the entire world these days. Even children have addicted to
internet
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the internet
 somehow.
Nevertheless
, can
internet
 replace traditional course books in schools?
Internet
 and book are two ways of
assimilate
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assimilating
 knowledge, that both have advantages and disadvantages.
For instance
, there are limitations for
internet
,
such
 as speed and traffic.
Also
 the
internet
 is
expensive yet
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expensive, yet
 in undeveloped countries.
On the other hand
, while we talking about pedagogical classes in cast away villages, the access of the
internet
 and devices, are not reachable presumably.
Otherwise
, while we argue about learning and
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 long distance learning in villages, we should consider some problems
for
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in
 book usage,
such
 as
possibility
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the possibility
 of making teacher-led lessons classrooms in villages or lack of supplies in
far
being one more than three
four
 districts.
Furthermore
,
number
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the number
 of children is the important matter up to a point. According to my view in conclusion the
internet
 can
replacement
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replace
instead
 of books in the recent future, because self-study is developing between people and gathering data in
internet
 is much more convenient than books and very Faster.

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