You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall.

Dear sir, I'm
writting
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writing
to you about the
stove
which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
had purchased on
last
week from your shop. On 12th October
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
bought a
stove
(
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(
Model LG T4) with the price is 40$. After
few day
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a few days
few days
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
had found out the fire start
,
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,
which on the left side
,
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,
didn't work. When
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
first
bought, the
stove
worked perfectly. Yesterday I turned on to cook my breakfast and it couldn't start. I called at your shop and informed about
this
sistuation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
. They said two days they will come to check my
stove
. From now it had been four
days but
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days, but
still nobody come. I'd like you to kindly replace it with the new
stove
as it still under the warranty period. You can send your
sale
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sales
person at my residence with the same and pick up the old one. I am available in the morning before 11 am. Yours sincerely

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