Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

Many people opine that the main environmental
problem
in the present is the
loss
of particular
species
of plants and animals, whereas others think that there are more important environmental problems. In my opinion, the
loss
of some
species
of plants and animal is the most important for environmental
problem
. In the present, our planet has a lot of environmental problems, which effects to every life,
such
as climate change with sea level rise and temperature increase. These
problems make
Accept comma addition
problems, make
poor productivity in agriculture, but people can use technology to solve these problems and people have an adaptation for survival.
For example
, people built the dam to storage rain water for agriculture and household in the summer.
While
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
Well
, people can deal with
others
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
environmental problems, the
loss
of particular
species
of plants and animals are cannot solve. Today, people do not have ability to create an
animal’s
Suggestion
animal
specie when that specie gone. If all animals in some
species
die, that animal will not appear in the world again like many ancient animals. The
loss
of some
species
of plants and animals
are
Suggestion
is
a serious environmental
problem
.
For example
, rubbish in
environment
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the environment
is a
problem
for many animals. Mali is a
payoon
a symptom of some physical hurt or disorder
pain
, she
die
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dies
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
eating plastic bag in the sea. If other
payoons
any substance that causes injury or illness or death of a living organism
poisons
peons
pains
eat
plastic bag
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the plastic bag
plastic bags
a plastic bag
like Mali, it will not have a
payoon
a symptom of some physical hurt or disorder
pain
in one day. In conclusion, the environmental problems have many
type
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types
,
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
problems people can solve it or change it, while people cannot solve
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
problems like the
loss
of many
species
of plants and animals. I think the
loss
of many
species
of plants and animals
are
Suggestion
is
the main
problem
.

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