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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

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There have been a time when youngsters used to take inspiration from the PM of the
country
 or probably from a social worker or a common man who has gone an extra mile to do something for the
country
, but
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
 people take inspiration from the entertainment industry people or from
sportsperson
such
 as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars. I would not completely agree with the fact that entertainers and sportsmen are
paid
Suggestion
paying
 too high because I believe that they
also
 work hard to reach
such
 heights and to become the apple of a common man's eye. They work from hours to years to earn that amount and to appear before the entire nation has a lot of requirements like a fit body, impeccable grooming and a healthy person and these requirements take a lot of money and celebrities have to shed that money because they are the role model of today's generation. They
also
 face bad days, mental stress and health issues but nothing gets displayed on the screen because that's what they get paid for. So, these all reasons make me not to completely do agree with the fact that a few of the people get paid too much amount. The other jobs that should be highly paid would be the
government
 jobs because in
government
 sector the possibility to steal tax is very less and which in turn strengthens the
country
. Less the corruption more the nation's
growth
 will be. Any of the jobs created by the
government
 is mostly human oriented because
such
 jobs focus on the
growth
 of the
country
 and at the same time give equal importance to the employees too and are always beneficial for the
country
's
growth
. If one would think from the perspective to help in the
growth
 of the
nation
Suggestion
national
government
 jobs will play an important role, but to encourage the youngsters to join
such
 jobs we need to attract them.
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