With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

Nowadays many animal

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are becoming

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due to

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instance, cutting trees and hunting. In the following

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I will discuss some of the biggest problems associated with animal extinction and will propose solutions to tackle

this

problem

. On the one hand, one of the most significant reasons

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animals

is

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a food

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chain.

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, it can be clearly seen that

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a part of

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dairy and protein.

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, the majority of

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country

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in the world

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have

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different

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.

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, Africa

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center

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of animal species and their people have great income in

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way.

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,

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animals

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plays a crucial role but

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cones

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with

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benefits

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such

as

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animal fertilizer.

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it can

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on growth

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and trees.

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, the best way to tackle

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this

problem

is in the hands of the

high ranking

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official.

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, if the government

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draconian punishments we will be faced with less human activity.

Nevertheless

, another factor which must be considered is

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the improvement

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of

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. Recent research has shown that

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counseling

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and making people aware could help us to tackle

this

problem

.

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, with

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the development of

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provincial towns deforestation will

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.

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Furthermore

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, enhancing building construction should not be run just for financial objectives. In conclusion, today we are suffering from

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of natural resources

because

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human activity like

,

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cutting trees and hunting

animals

.

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,

with

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enforcing draconian punishments and providing education we can solve

this

problem

.