Car ownership has increased rapidly over the past thirty years

Nowadays almost people live in big Cities and they have own cars to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their needs travelling from one place to another
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.
because
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Because
of
this
there is a traffic jam everywhere.
Therefore
, government should take strict decisions to deal with
this
problem like increasing
tax
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taxes
payment. 30 years ago the
car
owners
was
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were
actually less than the current situation. There
is
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are
many reasons behind
this
,
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,
firstly
cars become cheaper as technology grew and
second one
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the second one
is everyone wants to comfortable life
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some
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Some
years ago
family
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the family
families
had only one
car
ans
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and
at present time each family
owns average
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owns an average
two cars
.
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.
every
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Every
person
use
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uses
car
to go their
destination they
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destination, they
don't want to go
in
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on
public transport
.
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.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
by
this
increased traffic jam and accidents
However
, cars are very useful
.
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it
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It
save
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saves
our time and give a comfortable life
.
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.
now
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Now
a days people
uses
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are using
their
car
as a
texi
a car driven by a person whose job is to take passengers where they want to go in exchange for money
taxi
so they make money for their livelihoods. To conclude, it is true that the growth of the
car
owners is giving lot of traffic problems ,so the authorities have to make rules and trying to discourage the use of vechicle

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