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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the past in order people used smoke, hooting and animals to communicate with each other. These
communication
 methods had many limitations and wasn’t reliable. As an example, the messages were sent for short distances, the message was
nt
negation of a word or group of words
not
 clear, and
sender
Suggestion
the sender
 was not sure if the message was delivered. At the
next
 stage telegram and letters were introduced. In spite still some issues were remaining as before. Modern
communication
 is a vast topic, which could be described in different aspects. People have moved on to electronic equipment as a medium to communicate with each other, having no limitations in the distance. These devices are embedded with various features and provide the facility of updating.
Furthermore
, the
information
 sent through these
communication
 medium is convenient, secure and respond in seconds. The capability of
information
 storing facilities are maximized up to TB range. Comparing with modern
communication
, former methods can be neglected, due to lack of features. Communicating with new devices adds a cost, and internet plays a major role in most of the methods. Working with newer methods are easier and faster, which admit complements to modern technology. There are instances that malware occur, or
information
 is dropped while the
communication
 process is on but there are techniques, software and protocols develop to diminish them. Though there are a number of benefits in modern
communication
 I agree with the necessity of letter writing. Considering the parameters
such
 as, time and pool of storage, new methods get its priority. But, as we focus on security and for proofing documents, I still believed we cannot let hold of letters. As I summon up, modern
communication
 and letter writing are necessary when dealing with
information
.
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