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It is sometimes thought that the people who travel outside of their own country are more tolerant and understanding of others. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the recent years people travel a lot to other
countriese
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countries e
 for
job
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a job
 or studies. Some people think that the individuals who migrate to other countries are more tolerable to the difficulties and can understand the other people's problems.
This
 essay will discuss why I agree with
this
 opinion. One reason why I think the immigrants have an ability to tolerate and can manage the problems of others is that people tend to adjust the place they are living. By living in a foreign
country
 the individuals have to come in contact with various persons and problems related to job or studies..
Moreover
, there is no one to help them in difficult situations
.
Accept space
.
For example
, by working in a foreign
country
 people has to adjust to the customs and tradition of that
country
,
eventhough
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even though
 they are not used to the same situations. .
In addition
 to
this
, for one or other reason people help each other. In contrary, others
are believing
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believe
 that people going to foreign have difficulty in tolerating things and will not help others is because in a foreign
country
 people are from different nations.
Therefore they
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Therefore, they
 cannot adjust various cultures of different people.
Nevertheless
, I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
 that by living in different
country
 people becomes
good
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well
 enough to help others. In conclusion, the argument regarding mentality of people who travel to other countries is a debatable issue. I strongly believe that as tolerant as the people help others

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