The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The figure given shows the
birth
rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Both rates fluctuated dramatically during this
period.
China’s birth
rate
rose from around 10 percent
in the 1920s to 15 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1935. Change the spelling
per cent
Then
it fell sharply to around 5 percent
in both 1940 and 1945. It increased rapidly to a peak of 20 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1950. Change the spelling
per cent
After
this
, it fells dramatically to less than 10 percent
in 1955. Change the spelling
per cent
Finally
, it decreases steadily to about 2 percent
in 1980 and remained at Change the spelling
per cent
this
level until 2000.
Meanwhile, the US birth
rate
alternated at around 12 percent
from 1920 to 1940. It declined dramatically to under 5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 1945. Change the spelling
per cent
Next
, it progressed rapidly to a peak of about 15 percent
in 1950. After 1950, it fells continuously to about 12 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in the 1960s and around 7 or 8 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
during the Change the spelling
per cent
last
20 years of this
period.
Therefore
, although
the US birth
rate
generally
higher than the Add a missing verb
is generally
birth
rate
of China (especially after 1950), both birth
rates followed a very similar trend.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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