The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between

1920 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant
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The figure given shows the
birth
rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Both rates fluctuated dramatically during
this
period. China’s
birth
rate
rose from around 10
percent
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in the 1920s to 15
percent
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in 1935.
Then
it fell sharply to around 5
percent
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per cent
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in both 1940 and 1945. It increased rapidly to a peak of 20
percent
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per cent
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in 1950.
After
this
, it fells dramatically to less than 10
percent
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per cent
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in 1955.
Finally
, it decreases steadily to about 2
percent
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in 1980 and remained at
this
level until 2000. Meanwhile, the US
birth
rate
alternated at around 12
percent
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per cent
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from 1920 to 1940. It declined dramatically to under 5
percent
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per cent
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in 1945.
Next
, it progressed rapidly to a peak of about 15
percent
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per cent
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in 1950. After 1950, it fells continuously to about 12
percent
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in the 1960s and around 7 or 8
percent
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during the
last
20 years of
this
period.
Therefore
,
although
the US
birth
rate
generally
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higher than the
birth
rate
of China (especially after 1950), both
birth
rates followed a very similar trend.

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