Some museums have an admission charge while some do not. In my opinion, the drawbacks of an entrance fee are eclipsed by its benefits in the sense that the income will be ploughed back into operation and development of the museums.

Nowadays, there are many museums charge fees for entrance while some do not.

Although

the benefit of admission is that help the government develop

museums but

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museums, but

the drawback will outweigh due to

declining

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the declining number

number

of visitors. On the one hand, one of the main reasons which is considered as a benefit of

this

entrance fees is

making

engage in

doing

a fund to improve museums. In order to develop the

history

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historical

historic

places, paying for entrance is necessary.

This

means that, money

collect

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collects

from

visitors which

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visitors, which

use for operations, sanitation services, or so on, leading to improving the qualities of tour that makes visitors more enjoy when

attend

achieved or reached

attained

.

For example

, to reduce the boredom of history exhibition, video clips or 3D screens about the historical events.

On the other hand

, the positive drawback is reducing the

number

of visitors.

Moreover

, since museums play a vital role for educational and historical value, charge for admissions which make difficult for poor people to visit. In fact, there are a

number

of

student

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students

, who cannot afford to pay for that

fees

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fee

,

as a result

, the

number

of pupils who visits for study purposes will decline.

For instance

, when I was the 5th grade, my teacher organized a tour to visited

War Remnants

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the War Remnants

Museum in Ho Chi Minh city, my class had to pay 300 thousand dong for 25 students while travel fees

were

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had been

have been

just 100 thousand dong. In conclusion, the advantage of an admission fee is overshadowed by the disadvantage.