The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the percentage of three different
electricity
sources produced in four major countries from 2003 to 2008. On the whole, it is evident that while
Vietnam and India
produced considerably higher electricity
from fossil fuel, Sweden
and Morocco appeared to harness hydro
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hydropower
power
as their main electricity
source. Only India
and Sweden
had electricity
produced from nuclear energy.
Among four
mentioned nations, Correct article usage
the four
India
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India's
electricity
depended mostly on fossil fuel, which accounted for over four fifths
. Meanwhile, Add a hyphen
four-fifths
Sweden
and Morocco used only 4 percent
and 5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
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per cent
this
source, respectively, for Change preposition
of this
electricity
production. Nuclear power
, however
, was exploited only in India
and Sweden
, which consituted
4 Correct your spelling
constituted
percent
and 44 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
, respectively.
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per cent
Hydro
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Hydropower
power
was used mainly in Morocco, which made up 95 percent
, followed by Change the spelling
per cent
Sweden
, where over a
half Correct article usage
apply
electricity
production was responsible Change preposition
of electricity
by
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for
hydro
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hydropower
power
, while
India
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India's
electricity
production depended 14 percent
on Change the spelling
per cent
this
source, which was the smallest figure compared to other nations.Submitted by conheokun2005 on
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