In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Overpopulation
population
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is a great concern for many under-developed countries and the
government
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takes many steps to
control
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the uncontrolled increase of
population
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. In many countries,
government
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impose
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imposes
rules to restrict the number of children a family can have and
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restricts many facilities in case a family has too many children. But imposing a
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to restrict the number of children in a family is not a feasible solution. In my opinion, other ways of controlling the
population
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in a
country
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should be considered rather than imposing the
tax
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.
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of all, the
population
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is the main problem in most of the
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world countries whereas the developed countries mostly have
control
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over that issue. In countries like china, the
population
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is not a burden rather they have been able to use the large
population
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as the main workforce for the steady improvement of the
country
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. Overpopulation in an under-developed
country
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directly related to poverty, illiteracy,
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lifestyle and crime. So controlling the
population
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in these countries is a must and imposing a
tax
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on the poor people would not be a good idea. The trends show that
educated upper
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educated, upper
class and middle class do not take more than two children in these countries where the poor people seems like have no
control
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on that. If the
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imposes the
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on those poor people, their life would become more miserable. I completely agree that each
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should maintain some policies and should impose strict rules to
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the
population
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a
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has but increasing awareness and implementing other policies than
tax
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imposing would be better solutions. In conclusion, I completely agree that the
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of a
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should take any initiative to
control
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the over
population
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growth but
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growth, but
tax
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imposing to poor people is the least effective solution since there are many alternatives.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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