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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Over
Suggestion
Overpopulation
population
 is a great concern for many under-developed countries and the
government
 takes many steps to
control
 the uncontrolled increase of
population
. In many countries,
government
impose
Suggestion
imposes
 rules to restrict the number of children a family can have and
also
 restricts many facilities in case a family has too many children. But imposing a
tax
 to restrict the number of children in a family is not a feasible solution. In my opinion, other ways of controlling the
population
 in a
country
 should be considered rather than imposing the
tax
.
First
 of all, the
population
 is the main problem in most of the
third
 world countries whereas the developed countries mostly have
control
 over that issue. In countries like china, the
population
 is not a burden rather they have been able to use the large
population
 as the main workforce for the steady improvement of the
country
. Overpopulation in an under-developed
country
 directly related to poverty, illiteracy,
unhygienic
 lifestyle and crime. So controlling the
population
 in these countries is a must and imposing a
tax
 on the poor people would not be a good idea. The trends show that
educated upper
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educated, upper
 class and middle class do not take more than two children in these countries where the poor people seems like have no
control
 on that. If the
government
 imposes the
tax
 on those poor people, their life would become more miserable. I completely agree that each
government
 should maintain some policies and should impose strict rules to
control
 the
population
 a
country
 has but increasing awareness and implementing other policies than
tax
 imposing would be better solutions. In conclusion, I completely agree that the
government
 of a
country
 should take any initiative to
control
 the over
population
growth but
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growth, but
tax
 imposing to poor people is the least effective solution since there are many alternatives.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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