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Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?

#people #punishment #traffic #offences
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The
internet
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 has been flourishing and revolutionising the society proportionately since the post-modern era,
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, many people argue that
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 advancement has some negatives. The main benefits of using the
internet
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 are that communication and
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 of information, and disadvantages are lack of socialisation and addiction towards online media. On the one hand, the
internet
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, primary faster the way human communicated with each other compared 100 years ago.
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, current generations are able to have either
face
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 or voice conversation with their friend and family live other side of the world within the fraction of a
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 act as
source
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 The
internet
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 has been flourishing and revolutionising the society proportionately since the post-modern era,
however
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, many people argue that
this
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 advancement has some negatives. The main benefits of using the
internet
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is
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are
 that communication and
source
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 of information, and disadvantages are lack of socialisation and addiction towards online media. On the one hand, the
internet
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, primary
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more quickly
faster
 the way human
communicate
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communicated
 with each other compared 100 years ago.
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, current generations are able to have either
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 to
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 or voice conversation with their friend and family live other side of the world within the fraction of
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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