At present the media affects people’s lives significantly. What impact does this have on the society? Is it a negative or a positive development?

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Nowadays media

has been affecting

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have affected

people's lives dramatically, especially social media. While there are some non-debatable negative results it has brought to the community.

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, I profusely believe that it has positive

development

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developed

developing

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and foremost, social media has created social deprivation by disconnecting people on a personal basis because it connects them virtually and leaves the need for meeting personally at times.

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can develop a pattern of isolation and make them confined in one place and stop the development of basic interpersonal skills.

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, it entices the sedentary lifestyle because it engages people's attention greatly in

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a way that often they don't like to do anything else and

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, affect their health.

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, despite these downsides, it is

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evident that there are positive changes that the media has brought to peoples' lives.

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, it exhorts smooth, clear, fast and easy communication by connecting people all over the world.

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, Many relatives and friends from different parts of

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the world

are able to be up to date with each other with the help of social networking websites.

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, it unites the whole nation together on any hot potato whenever there is a discussion.

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, Me Too movement success' credit mainly goes to social media. Had it

been not there,

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not been there,

it'd been impossible for the common voice to come out on a global platform and share experience to gain justice.

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, many national and global key issues are getting discussed on a broad level to understand the root cause and on how to eradicate the problems collaboratively. In conclusion, while

media

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the media

has

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have

some negative impacts like isolating human- being

from

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society

personally

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personalities

, it has many more advantages in community development by making communication convenient and faster. It

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provides a platform to common person to raise his concerns at any level.

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, it is recommended that social media should be used in balance to avoid any bad effects.

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Your opinion

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