One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think that advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, advancement and new developments in the medical field are phenomenal. Governments allocate a large amount in their annual budget for research and development to minimize different diseases. In my opinion, medical

care

advantages outweigh the disadvantages because with the advancement of medical

care

, now people can contribute more to society and learn from their elders’ knowledge. The fundamental advantage is that people are more conscious about their diet, daily workouts and routine checkups. Modern facilities and advanced medicines have transformed the situation and cured many deadly diseases. With improved lifespan, people contribute more to society. Early retirement plans let them start another profession as they are more active these days.

For instance

, many professionals these days start their own business after their retirement. Resultantly,

this

trend wipes out unemployment. As a direct result of improved life-expectancy, people can spend more time with their family and grandchildren. Working parents can leave their children in a safe hand while they are at work. The way grandparents

care

for their grandchildren is incomparable to the attention they would receive from a

daycare

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day care

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

. These elder people can share their experiences that will be useful for children in their upcoming

endeavors

a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

endeavours

. In stark contrast, longer life expectancy does not mean that a person will remain healthy throughout their life. But the number of retired people increase for the time being and the government spending on pension schemes and other welfare services will

also

increase directly.

Furthermore

, more retired people

also

mean lower tax revenue.

Consequently

, all these issues will ultimately put a tremendous burden on the

country

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country's

economy. To conclude, people these days have increased lifespan due to better medical

care

. Despite the disadvantages, I believe

this

development is significantly beneficial because

elder

advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)

older

people contribute more

in

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to

society and youngster learns from elder knowledge.