Some people think that history is important subject in education.other think that science and technology are more important .discuss both point of veiws and give your opinion.

In
modern era
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the modern era
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History
,
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,
science
and
technology
are both very important aspect in
life
.
However
some
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Some
people think that
history
is very vital.While
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
think that
science
and
technology
have
a
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an
important role in our
life
.
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.
Both
veiw
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view
point
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points
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would discuss
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the upcoming paragraph
along with my opinion. Considering the importance of
history
,
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,
firstly
history
is very
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for every student because
history
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History
is attached with happing of past time
this
is related
of
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to
my
sikh
an adherent of Sikhism
Sikh
religion
.
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.
For example
guru
gobind
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Gobind
singh
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Singh
ji fought many
war
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wars
to save
sikh
an adherent of Sikhism
Sikh
religion as well as
sacrified whole family
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a sacrificed whole family
sacrificed whole family
from
sikh
an adherent of Sikhism
Sikh
religion
.
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As a result
,
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from the incident children learn very important
life
skills.
Morever
in addition
Moreover
,
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,
if
history
will be
avialable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
in education
,
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,
then
children will be aware about
this
.
Howerver
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However
,
science
and
technology
are
also
essentail part
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essential parts
essential part
an essential part
because in
contemprary
characteristic of the present
contemporary
era whole
word
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Word
depend on
technology
so that teacher should teach
this
subject in every school.In future when children will do jobs
,
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,
then
they can easily handle the jobs
.
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.
For instance
,
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job in electricity department
,
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,
bank
,
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,
science
lab
,
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doctor line are in great demand
.
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.
Thus if
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Thus, if
children will have more knowledge about these
suject
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subjects
subject
they can get
job
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a job
easily
.
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.
They become successful person in their
life
To conclude
,
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,
in my opinion
science
and
technology
are
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is
very vital subject for future because the upcoming time will be era of
techonolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
.

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