Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there other better way. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is true that by reducing
maximum speed
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the maximum speed limit
limit
on
vechicles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
, the risk of accidents can be minimised. On
other hand
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the other hand
, there are other better ways of
road
.
This
essay agrees with the fact that there are better ways for
road
safety
rather than reducing the speed
limit
. On one side, reducing speed
limit
can improve
road
safety
to a certain extent.
Moreover
, the reduced speed
limit
makes
driver
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the driver
drivers
a driver
more aware of the situation and gives more reaction time during
accident
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an accident
the accident
accidents
. A small extend in the reaction time can be a life saving. But the reduced maximum speed
limit
in highways makes the traffic more slow and make more
inconvinience
an inconvenient discomfort
inconvenience
inconveniences
inconvenienced
. For
intance
an occurrence of something
instance
, the reduced speed
limit
nearby hospitals and schools
is
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are
a good idea. On another side, there are better ways for
road
safety
without reducing speed
limit
due improvement of sensors and braking technology.
Furthermore
, dawn of AI and machine learning has provided better algorithms which can predict accidents and
avaoid
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
negligence of
driver
Suggestion
the driver
drivers
.
For example
, in autonomous
vechicles
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
, better sensor technology combines with Artificial
technlogy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
uses addition
safety
measures
such
air bags, disc braking, predictive algorithms and
pripheral
on or near an edge or constituting an outer boundary; the outer area
peripheral
visual (LIDAR) technology. In conclusion,
although
reducing
maximum speed
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the maximum speed limit
limit
is helpful to a certain extent,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that there are better
techlogies
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technologies
which not only increase
road
safety
but
also
increase the speed of the vehicle. It is most important to have
safety
along with the speed.

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