Your friend has written to you asking for your advice on his/her parents who will be visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Suggest the places they can visit Recommend a place where they can stay Offer to do something with them.

Dear Shruti, I hope
this
finds you and your family well. I’m glad enough to know about Uncle and Aunt's visit to Nepal. You remember that we were planning a short vacation for Mustang which unfortunately we were unable to make. I hereby recommend them to spend the
first
few days in Mustang followed by Pokhara; “the heaven on earth”. There are a plethora of places they can cover in these destinations. I would recommend Hotel Jomson in Mustang and Hotel Annapurna in Pokhara for their stay. I checked the review and found the majority of supporters. Even my parents stayed there during their visit and found it commendable. I ‘m
more keen
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on adventurous activities but considering their age, I’ll arrange hiking and camping so they can enjoy their fullest. I can’t wait long to meet them. With love, Komal
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