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Some people think it is better to spend and enjoy their money once they earn it. Others think it is better to save their money and enjoy it in the future. Which stand do you agree with and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Having monetary stability is very important in today’s life. Earning and spending power of people has increased immensely due to
availability
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the availability
 of multiple IT jobs in
market
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the market
. Some people believe in spending their
money
 as they gain it, while some believe in saving it for
future
 and security. I support the thought of saving
money
 for
future
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the future
. With the influx of multinational companies in
market
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the market
, people are getting high paid jobs easily. There is
plethora
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a plethora
 of opportunities to try in pool of jobs and get one easily. With
this
 rise in
number
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the number
 of jobs, spending
money
 on goods is
also
 increased. Inclination of youth these days is more towards buying luxury items and fulfilling their dreams rather than saving
money
 for
future
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the future
. Looking at the opportunities of
growing market
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a growing market
the growing market
growing markets
 and
willingness
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the willingness
 of people investing in goods, various startups of finance companies are taking place.
However
,
future
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the future
 is unpredictable, and we cannot forecast what
future
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the future
 is going to serve us on
plate
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a plate
the plate
, we should make a practice of saving a definite amount of
money
 from our earnings, which can be utilized in
future
 for crucial things.
For instance
, if someone gets into
medical emergency
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a medical emergency
, they can use the savings rather than asking for
money
 from friends or relatives. We can invest in various government schemes as well like pension plans, it will be fruitful for us in dotage.
Although
, saving
money
 or not is individual choice but in my opinion, I want to pen
down saying
Accept comma addition
down, saying
 that, while you are earning, saving
money
 is
good idea
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a good idea
 as it can be used in
future
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the future
 for important things.
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