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Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Financial
education
 should be a mandatory component of the
school
 program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this
 statement? It is an obvious fact that
financial aspect
Suggestion
the financial aspect
 is an important part of the daily life, as an adult and even as a young individual. Every one of us has to make financial decision to spend money for vital needs
such
 as food, clothes, home and more. The question is whether to start with financial
education
 as part of
school program
Suggestion
the school program
a school program
 or to postpone it for a later stage in life. For me, I support
this
 idea that financial
education
 for teenagers is necessary. In Vietnam, many students have to learn far from home. Every month, they receive a limited allowance from their
family
Suggestion
families
. If they are trained about finance, they will consider to
spent
Suggestion
spend
 money reasonably. Which demand is really necessary and which isn't. People who are without financial knowledge will spend money freely. So maybe they buy something mostly worthless.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
, they are easily in debt.
In addition
, finance should be subject in
school curriculum
Suggestion
the school curriculum
school curricula
. During the course or after
graduate
Suggestion
graduation
, many young people begin trading in something.
However
, most of them are lacking
capability
Suggestion
the capability
 of financial analysis. Commonly, the reason can be the lack of good foundations or not take in mean of financial terms.
Therefore
, starting from an early age, building a strong background, can very likely reduce risks in their business. In conclusion, I agree that financial
education
 should equip in
school
.
However
, preparing knowledge about finance should include awareness of
real value
Suggestion
the real value
 of services and merchandise,
otherwise
 it will make them so considerate and gradually become miserly.
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