The bar chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The graph shows data about the number of adult British
people
who donate money to charities in the years 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, donations from the three younger groups
of people
declined remarkably in 2010 compared to 1990. In contrast
, donating people
went up in the two older groups
. In the
1990 Correct article usage
apply
middle aged
Add a hyphen
middle-aged
people
donated more among all groups
, and in 2010 it is above aged people
who donated more.
Firstly
, around 17% of youth between the ages 18
to 25 donated in 1990 compared to that Change preposition
of 18
of
about 7% in 2010. Change preposition
apply
Similarly
, 26-35 aged people
declined by around 10% in donations between
the years. More than 40% of 35-50 Change preposition
over
age
grouped
Change the form of the verb
group
people
who donated in 1990 fell by around 5% in 2010. These are the people
who contributed for
more Change preposition
to
donation
in 1990.
On the other side, older Fix the agreement mistake
donations
people
of age
groups
51 to 65 and above 65 are highly interested in donating as their numbers increased by 5% and 3% respectively between 1990 and 2010. 51 to 65 age
people
account for more donations in 2010, followed by 35
to 40 Correct article usage
the 35
age
group and above 65 age
grouped people
with 35% each.Submitted by Goutham on
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