Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than other experiences we may have in life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Personality

development

is one of the important factors in our life.

Although

characteristics with born have more

influence

on our

personality

d

evelopment according

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development, according

to research,

society

and family environments have

also

a greater impact on building

personality

.

Firstly

,

this

essay will discuss about the

influence

of genetic characteristics and

s

econdly it

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secondly, it

will cover up the

influence

of

society

and family environments to d

evelop individual’s

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develop an individual’s

personality

. On the

first

hand, genetic characteristics can play a significant role in the

development

of human

personality

. Analysis the view of scientists, human could owe some characteristic by born and these characteristics h

elp

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will help

him to build his

personality

in the future.

For example

, people could be introvert from his childhood. As he is an introvert by born, he tends to ignore the people even his family members. So, it is one kind genetic characteristics which make his

personality

as like an introvert. On the

second

hand,

society

, family, friends are the important terms that could help someone’s to improve his

personality

. People could be c

hanged his

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changed, his

b

ehavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

by the

influence

of

society

environment. Older citizen of the

society

can help the younger to build their

personality

while f

amily

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the family

families

can play some role to change the

personality

of the family members.

For example

, one of my friends always face trouble while he wants to talk with unknown person. But our friend circle understands about

this

matter and we try to help him to remove his shyness. We always e

ncourage him he

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encourage him as he

could remove

this

characteristic and develop his

personality

. Now he becomes more confident to talk with n

ewer

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new

people. Since he could not face the unknown person, now he can give the presentation in front of unknown audiences. To sum up, it can be concluded that genetic characteristics have t

he higher

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the highest

influence

to develop

personality

compared to other experiences in someone’s life. But

society

, friends, family environment could be act as a major role f

or

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in

the

development

of i

ndividual’s

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an individual’s personality

the individual’s personality

personality

. It can be suggested that no matters what are the genetic characteristics, people can develop his

personality

by the other experiences of his life.