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Topic: Some people think that success is best measure for intelligence while others think that intelligence can be measured other ways. What’s your opinion on this ?

#topic #people #success #measure #intelligence #what’s
Success
 not only brings power in one’s
life but
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life, but
also
 a perception that one is brilliant as well. People look forward to hear and implement advices from successful people thou intelligence can be calculated through many metrics.
This
 essay will enlighten multiple factors which one should consider to measure smartness. Mostly it is observed that people really admire
brainpower
 of
flourished
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flourishing
 person. Whereas
success
 can knock doors due to multiple of factors
such
 as
ability
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the ability
 to learn from mistakes, face challenges or hard work. It is often noted that resilient person
is more successful who
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who is more successful
 rather than grieving upon its failure, educates himself and bounces back.
For instance
, Steve Jobs wouldn’t have been renowned today if he would have stopped his struggle after
fall
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the fall
 of Apple company.
Likewise
, Nelson Mandela, the
first
 black president of South Africa, would have been just another political figure if he would have not fought for justice and equality. For these
reasons it’s
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reasons, it’s
 wise not to consider
success
 as directly proportional to intelligence.
On the other hand
, almost all the institutes
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
 offer logical and IQ test which scores mind-power of an individual. These
test
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tests
helps
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help
 us judge the intellectual level of a person. Candidates may score high or low, but none of these determine their
success
 level. It is often seen students who pass with flying colours end up having a mediocre
job whereas
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job, whereas
 an average student serves
at
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as
 a reputed multinational firm. It won’t be wrong to consider intelligence on
basis
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the basis
 of multiple factors. In a nutshell,
success
 is
outcome
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the outcome
an outcome
 of hard work and resilience. Not all intelligent people are successful or vice versa. In my opinion, being intelligent is not enough to be successful. It is
combination
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a combination
the combination
 of multiple factors like hard work,
determination and
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determination, and
 opportunity which leads to
success
.

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