The amount of time spent on sport and exercise should be increased in schools in order to tackle the problem of overweight children. Do you think this is the best way to deal with the problem? What other suggestions can you suggest?

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exercising as it provides various advantages for them.

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method will definitely educe some severe problems in current society. Another solution to the overweight problem amongst children is to adjust their eating habits. By replacing junk foods and carbonated drinks with organic, fat

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od and juices. Balancing your food consumption will decrease the biological fat in your body and

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lessen the chances of being obese. In order to tackle the problem about overweight children, schools should

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organize speeches and talk shows with students to help them aware of the seriousness of the issue and suggest suitable diet and organizing talk shows are

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solutions to

this

problem in children currently. To sum up, eliminating sports and activities from school curriculum will lead to several consequences on

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