These days many of us prefer to throw damaged things away, whereas in the past people used to repair damaged items and keep them for a long time. Explain why do you think this change has happened. What are the effects of this change in attitude?

Dear Rahul, Hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my delayed joining in your firm. It might take a minimum of 3 months for me to quit my current job.
Moreover
, I have done a lot of groundwork to explore most of the technical and non-technical aspects of your company.
Although
you are aware of my notice period problem I wanted to remind you again that my relieving date is post 3 months from now.
Thus I
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Thus, I
am unable to join your firm at a short notice.
Additionally
, I wanted to share my thought about your firm. I am very much excited about joining
wonderful corporation
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the wonderful corporation
a wonderful corporation
. Where I will get
to chance to explore
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chance to explore
a lot of new technologies and customized tools. Hope you understand my current situation and make appropriate changes to easy my joining process.
yours
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Yours
sincerely,
Shrey
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Shari
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