On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item fortunately you have travel insurance to cover your the cost of anything you lost. Write a letter to the manager . Describe the item you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do?

Dear sir, I am an English teacher named Irfan Ali, who works in a university. I went on a holiday, and I lost my laptop. I had
an
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insurance to cover any damage which was caused by
losing
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loss
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. I am writing
this
to claim for the damage.
First
, I lost my laptop which I got from Rawalpindi in 2018, and it was HP with 500 hard
disk
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and
4
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GB processor. It
costed
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cost
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25000 rupees.
Secondly
, I lost it while I travelled to Germany in the
last
month. I took a transit flight from Karachi via Dubai. While spending time in Dubai, I lost it, where I was sleeping and I did not realise until I reached Germany.
Finally
, as I had insured my travel with your company, so I would like you
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it with the same model, which
i
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had with a new one. As It is mentioned in the travel insurance document, that you can get
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a replacement
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in case of anything
lost
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is lost
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! Kindly arrange it as soon as possible I will be waiting for
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response in due course. Yours faithfully Irfan Ali
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable possession
  • insurance claim
  • misplace
  • irreplaceable
  • receipt
  • policyholder
  • reimbursement
  • coverage
  • claim number
  • deductible
  • documentation
  • authenticate
  • liability
  • premium
  • accidental loss
  • indemnity
  • beneficiary
  • contact details
  • substantiate
  • correspondence
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