More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Remote working is becoming more popular now a
days
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day
. With the advancement of
technology
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technology, office
office
goers
are
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Are
preferring to
work
from
home
full time or part time rather than going to
work place
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a workplace
workplace
the workplace
everyday
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every day
. It has both advantages and disadvantages. Working from
home
has its own advantages
such
as commute time
to
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in
office
is saved which can be easily
utilized
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Utilized
to do household chores as
well putting
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well, putting
the same effort
for
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to
work
.
Its
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It's
beneficial for both
employer
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Employer
and employee. Employers don't have to reserve
a
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an
office
space for the worker and
hence
they
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
them
can
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Can
save the money towards rental. Technology has advanced so much that meeting and conference calls
can
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Can
be taken from
home
with
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by
phone and video conference. There are
lot
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lots
of applications
such
as Skype, Goto meeting
are
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is
available which can be easily available on computers and smart phones to take the
office
meetings
at
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At
comfort of their
home
. Doctors and
medicine
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medical
specialists are not behind the race
also
. Now a days many doctors
provide
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Provide
consultation from their
home
with
help
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the help
of technologies
such
as tele-
medicine which
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medicine, which
is a boon for a patient.
On the other hand
, there are quite a few disadvantages of working from
home
. Even if the worker works from
home
worker is still in a homely environment and there could be instances of disturbance from family members and children at
home
. He can never give his 100 percent to
work
when working from
home
. During a conference call there could be a chance of
back ground
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Background
Back ground
noise coming from pets and infants, which clearly breaks the continuity of the call. Many a times employee
has
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have
to put his hand on
house hold
a social unit living together
household
chores and it greatly impacts his or her productivity. There are numerous benefits of working from
home
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home, however
however
, in my opinion its better to visit
work
place
for
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to
work
where he or she can give his best to
work
.
Submitted by rakesh.cp on

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