People want to immigrate to rich countries. What are the reasons? Is this positive or negative?
Recently, it has been notable that several people choose to
immigrate
to developed countries. There leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
is
a variety of possible reasons for Suggestion
are
this
including the searching for the advanced lifestyle and perfect public services in the rich countries, whereas there are still drawbacks of Linking Words
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essay agrees that immigration value is more significant. Linking Words
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discuss the causes of Linking Words
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phenomenon followed by an analysis of its main merit.
On the one hand, there are two principal reasons why some people decide to live permanently in the rich countries. Linking Words
First
and foremost, immigrants can get the benefits of the modern infrastructure and facilities.To illustrate, developed countries Linking Words
such
as the United States of America have possessed one of the greatest transportation systems due to their high consideration of developing public services. Another additional reason is that the breakthrough Linking Words
of
communication and computer technology may offer opportunities for employment. Suggestion
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For instance
, the New York Times reported in January 2019 that the unemployment rate has decreased gradually in America in the Linking Words
last
six years Linking Words
as a result
of the significant development in the information technology sector. As a consequence, moving to richer countries will possibly enhance immigrants’ life.
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On the other hand
, I suppose the benefits of immigration would exceed its Linking Words
downsides especially
in terms of educational prospect. Accept comma addition
downsides, especially
In other words
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developed countries educational system
is at an advanced stage in comparison of any developing country. Canada, Suggestion
a developed country's educational system
developed country's educational system
fore
example, has a great number of prestigious universities all over the world appropriate to; intended for
for
as a result
of its advanced economic system, which Linking Words
provids
the scientific research with needed give something useful or necessary to
provides
fund
. Suggestion
funds
funding
Hence
, if we move and stay in a rich country, we could possibly advance our educational level.
To conclude, people have a desire to Linking Words
immigrate
to developed countries leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
as a result
of searching for a Linking Words
favorable
life. I am of the opinion that the merits of travelling and staying in richer encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
countries including
beneficial work condition, great quality of life with practical Accept comma addition
countries, including
facilitiesas
well as Suggestion
facilities as
advanced educational system
, these positive aspects are more notable than the adverse influence it causes.Suggestion
an advanced educational system
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