Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. Why they do this. Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people.

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The showbiz world is leaving deep effects on common people. As they are following the celebrities on social media, television or in periodicals.
Although
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this
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is
insane but
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insane, but
the trend is increasing over the past decade. In my opinion, people should live in a natural way rather to mimic someone. Specifically, the lifestyle of celebrities is very
luxries
displaying luxury and furnishing gratification to the senses
luxurious
that an ordinary person can
afforad
be able to spare or give up
afford
it.
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, a certain class of people set the trend to follow famous people's style.
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class of ordinaries not only spend beyond their limits but
also
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take loans to enjoy a style of favourite hero. Mostly, young generation is
adicts
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Adicts
addict
audits
to the
favourtisim
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of
celebraties
a widely known person
celebrities
. While following the famous
celeberity
a widely known person
celebrity
celebrities
people changed their hairstyle, clothes, eating
habbit
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habits
habit
and a lot more.
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, nowadays popular
barnds
a name given to a product or service
brands
bands
bonds
earn a lot because followers are excited to buy the things
weared
affected by wear; damaged by long use
worn
by the models on television or in a magazine. The fashion industry is paying millions to their models to make it more trendy among
public
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the public
. A published report show
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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