It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Old-fashioned cultures and technology developments always criss-cross their swords against at each other.

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I completely concede that technology developments will eclipse the old-styled cultures, I can agree to

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view only with certain exceptions.

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essay will discuss in detail in which cases technology will swallow the old cultures and in which cases it will not. On the one hand, we see advancements in most of the fields that help mankind. Right from the pinhole medical surgeries, the machine which is

weaving

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woven

cotton and silk garments in manufacturing, genetic engineering in crops and various plantations to name a few. A few decades ago, these industries had struggled for their mere existence as their presence was whittled by old styled practices

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, in order to remove a cataract from an eye, the surgery had to be made by knives which resulted in loss of blood.

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, the efficiency of non-occurrence of cataracts was so bleak.

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to that, the patient was needed to take a minimum of 3-4 months rest before delivering his duties.

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, the hand labour was not

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created

in terms of weaving handicrafts. Because of these challenges, technical innovations were made to plug the old-styled loop holes.

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, there are certain places where niche-edged advancements can never penetrate their area of dominance, in all of the fields of mankind.

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, a heritage building made up of limestone by manual construction can neither be simplified nor simulated by the advancements. That’s the reason, there is a strong vocal opposition from people, when any of the governments decided to demolish their old buildings. It is an irony that, unmanned metro trains that ferries people are still managed by humans, as we find it all the more scary to travel in a completely unmanned train. That confirms the point that, some of the technical advancements need to be monitored by traditional methods. To recapitulate, the niche-edged technologies are always welcomed with red carpet where the traditional practices lost their ground in proving their worthiness.

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, not all of the old cultures are stamped as disuse to the mankind. Some are still reliable even for hundreds of years to come.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

366 words

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traditional cultures
technological development
modern society
incompatible
decline
traditional crafts
rituals
digital communication
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online archives
virtual museums
social media
coexist
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cultural tourism
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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it's bad for them. Why is this? What is an effective way to improve people's healthy eating habits?

It Is Better For Students To Live Away From Home During Their University Studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Study shows that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?