Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree?
Nowadays, with all of the development of social networks people are seeking for attention, fame, money. Young people all over the world are looking for validation on Instagram, Twitter and other social networks. A lot of people are looking at the film stars and music celebrities with the envy, because we tend to think that being famous and popular equals being happy.
It is true that celebrities are generally richer than most of the people, they earn a very good income from acting and singing.
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can say "goodbye" to the simple lifestyle and of course it can be overwhelming.
In conclusion, I would say that there are advantages and disadvantages in being famous. Some people may need validation to be happy and some don't. In my opinion, there are plenty other ways to be happy and successful without being a celebrity, because "happiness" is something unique for everyone.Accept comma addition
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