The best way to deal with the rising traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this option?

When discussing the issue of increased

traffic

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and

transportation

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problems one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue. Some believe that encouraging people to move to bigger cities will not change

traffic

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,

becuase

for the reason that; on account of

because

by increasing the

popluation

the people who inhabit a territory or state

population

populations

pollution

we increase the amount of cars used. Others, Including

my self

reflexive form of "me"

myself

, agree with the above statement and think that people should move to major cities in order to avoid

access

a quantity much larger than is needed

excess

use

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of cars. In

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essay, I will provide examples and reasons to support my opinion. One argument in favour of my opinion is that people who live in big cities can

use

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public

transportation

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that is

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not accessible in rural areas.

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has been shown in a poll performed among the inhabitants of New York state. In the

poll more

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poll, more

than 50% of the people living in New York

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reported using public

transportation

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instead

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of cars for work, in comparison to people living in small cities, which reported only 20%

use

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of public

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.

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shows that people who live in major cities can

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use the

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use, the

local infrastructure

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of cars, which directly decrease

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. Another point to support my opinion is that when living in big cities, all the local needs are

near by

close at hand

nearby

and

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people do not

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their cars.

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, families living in the Negev, the southern most part of Israel, need to drive 15 miles in order to arrive

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the nearest hospital.

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result there

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result, there

are daily

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jams surrounding the hospital.

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is contrast to Tell Aviv, where the hospital is located in the city

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

and people can walk,

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of driving. In

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conclusion, I

agree with the above statement, and think that encouraging people to live in big cities is a good way to address the rising

traffic

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. If we all live close, we can

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other means of

transportation

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, which will help us to decrease

traffic

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and save our environment.