The best way to deal with the rising traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this option?
When discussing the issue of increased
traffic
and transportation
problems one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue. Some believe that encouraging people to move to bigger cities will not change traffic
, becuase
by increasing the for the reason that; on account of
because
popluation
we increase the amount of cars used. Others, Including the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
populations
pollution
my self
, agree with the above statement and think that people should move to major cities in order to avoid reflexive form of "me"
myself
access
a quantity much larger than is needed
excess
use
of cars. In this
essay, I will provide examples and reasons to support my opinion.
One argument in favour of my opinion is that people who live in big cities can use
public transportation
that is
not accessible in rural areas. This
has been shown in a poll performed among the inhabitants of New York state. In the poll more
than 50% of the people living in New York Accept comma addition
poll, more
city
reported using public Suggestion
City
transportation
instead
of cars for work, in comparison to people living in small cities, which reported only 20% use
of public transportation
. This
shows that people who live in major cities can use the
local infrastructure Accept comma addition
use, the
instead
of cars, which directly decrease traffic
.
Another point to support my opinion is that when living in big cities, all the local needs are near by
and close at hand
nearby
therefore
people do not use
their cars. For example
, families living in the Negev, the southern most part of Israel, need to drive 15 miles in order to arrive to
the nearest hospital. Suggestion
at
As a
result there
are daily Accept comma addition
result, there
traffic
jams surrounding the hospital. This
is contrast to Tell Aviv, where the hospital is located in the city center
and people can walk, an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
instead
of driving.
In conclusion I
agree with the above statement, and think that encouraging people to live in big cities is a good way to address the rising Accept comma addition
conclusion, I
traffic
. If we all live close, we can use
other means of transportation
, which will help us to decrease traffic
and save our environment.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite