Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays we can see there is a huge count of abortion
rates which
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rates, which
is growing very fast. One set of people say
this
must be implemented in a proper way while the others oppose
this
should not happen anytime. Let’s discuss both sides. On the one hand, the number of miscarriage counts
is increasing
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has increased
today. People say it purely depends on their personal interest and opinion and no one can debate about it. But they want
this
to be done officially. The Government must impose a rule to make it happen officially to avoid future issues. As
this
is a sensitive issue,
this
should not create a bad impact because they are already taking
this
decision in depression.
For example
, I recently saw a piece of information in the newspaper
where
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were
doing abortions is accepted in a few countries, but they have not specified the country names.
On the other hand
, if we see the other set of people oppose to
this
argument. They say miscarriage leads to severe
health
issues. It affects the individual’s
health
badly. By doing
this
the individual and their family members get affected physically and mentally and it creates a huge amount of stress and pain.
For example
, one of my friends had
miscarriage
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a miscarriage
recently and because of that, she faced a lot of
health
issues by taking more medicines. In my opinion, abortion depends on an individual’s interest and unless it is not affecting their
health
,
this
can be done on their own without anyone’s advice. In conclusion,
however
, they are both sides of people having views on abortion, the individual must think twice before doing it and consulting with their family members and to think
of
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about
the future implications. It is not a very happy activity as it affects the people around them. The Decision should be wise and correct.
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