Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product such as a cell phone and services like medical treatment. Do you agree or disagree?

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When we buy any
product we always
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product, we always
consider the
price
. But some people
thinks
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think
price
is the most important thing
when buying
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when buying a product
product
like mobile
phone
and medical
treatment
services.
Price
is one of the important
thing
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things
we
cosider
deem to be
consider
when we buy
product
or services.
Price
is the only aspect we should consider when we will buy a
product
or
service
.
Quality
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The quality
of the
product
and
service
depends on the
price
. Good
price
means great. We pay huge money to get
iphone
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iPhone
because we receive the highest standard. If we need to get
highest
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the highest quality treatment
quality
treatment
we must pay
premium fee
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a premium fee
.
For example
, India has very cheap health care
service
. But the former cricketer Yuvraj Singh went to USA to get cancer
treatment
at
premium cost
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a premium cost
.
Price
is the on the aspect of buying. But it is not the only one. Low
price
means bad
quality
is old concept. Now we are in the age of technology where we can easily get the
premium
quality
in low
price
. Nowadays we do not need to pay a
premium
to get a
quality
cell
phone
. Samsung Galaxy flagship offers
preium
payment for insurance
premium
quality
at
low low
less than normal in degree or intensity or amount
low
price
compare to
iphone
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iPhone
.
For example
, now we can get various mid range and flagship
phone
from renowned
comapnies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
which can beat
iphone
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iPhone
not only in
quality
but
also
in every
aspects
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aspect
. Apart from cell
phone
product
, medical
treatment
is now less costly than previous.
Price
can not be a most important aspect we need to consider. We need to
comapare
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compare
the
product
or
service
qualities with
price
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prices
a price
. We must focus if
such
product
or
service
serves the purpose. But
yes we
Accept comma addition
yes, we
need to consider the
price
as per our budget.
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