The government has annnounced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university. Use specific details in your discussion.

Recently the discussion about whether or not to have the
university
built in our
community
becomes a hot topic in our n
eighborhood.
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
Some people consider that
u
niversity
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the university
will bring more advantages than disadvantages to our
community
and agree with the suggestion; another group has a different standpoint. They think that establishing a
university
in our
community
will generate more disadvantages to our
community
. Personally, I believe the proverb, ‘one coin, both sides’. Of course, establishing a
university
also
has advantages and disadvantages as well. There are many advantages of establishing a new
university
in our
community
.
First
,
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niversity
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the university
can bring prosperity to our
community
.
For example
, when the
university
is built, it will attract many students to come to study.
Therefore
, the needs of the students will increase
such
as the articles for daily use.
Then
we may consider running stores and restaurants near the
university
.
Therefore
, more job opportunities will be provided, and the local people will have the priority to get the jobs. As the result, people can work to support their family financially, at the same time they are able to take care of their families without leaving distance as c
urrent situation.
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the current situation
Second
, when the
university
is built, the government will take into account improving the system of transportations. They may build subway connected to the city, which will bring us more conveniences and attract more people to come f
or
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from
investments. We can predict that as soon as the subway is built, our house price will be increased immediately.
Consequently
, our n
eighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
will become prosperous.
S
econd advantage
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The second advantage
is that when the
university
is built, the government may investigate money to improve the environment around our
community
.
For example
, building a park is necessary for the student to have entertainment or relaxation when they have free time.
T
hus we
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Thus, our
Thus our
local people
also
can benefit from
this
project. We can take a walk with our family after supper or play in the park on weekends or holidays, which will bring us a lot of f
uns
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fun
and accelerate the union of our families. The disadvantages of building the
university
in our
community
cannot be ignored.
First
, building a
university
takes a long time. During the process of building the construction, it will make too many noises and pollutions, the noises from the machine and the workers. It will influence our l
ives
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lives, such
such
as our sleep, our study and so on.
Also
, it will bring us many inconveniences.
For instance
, the roads may be blocked. Many trucks will pass by our n
eighborhood.
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
Thus
, we may have an unrest lives during proceeding the construction
Second
, when the
university
is built, more and more people will flow to our
c
ommunity including
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community, including
the students as well as those who come f
or
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from
running a business
then
o
ur
plural of "I"
we
place will become too crowded and noisy. As the result, we may not possible to enjoy a quiet and clean environment as presence.
This
absolutely reduces our quality of our lives.
Third
, building a
university
means we will lose a lot of our l
ands.
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land
Building a
university
is not just building a construction it
also
requires the whole equipment, the campus, the libraries, and the roads etc. What if our
next
generations if the lands are taken for building the
university
? Where shall they live?
This
is a big issue that we need to take into account. To sum up, building a
university
near our
community
has advantages and disadvantages as well.
Therefore
, before making the decision we shall consider both aspects and measure them carefully.

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